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　　肖传国的综述等于复述？

　　作者：james_hussein_bond

　　肖传国2006年在European Urology上的综述引言中的开头两段分别抄自The 
Journal of Urology两篇不同的文章。显然前面两篇文章的引言是会讲英文的共
同作者帮他写的。肖写综述的时候没有讲英文的共同作者帮忙，只好抄以前的了。

　　说前面两篇引言是别人帮他写的，是有根据的。他抄的时候，自作聪明地改
动了几处。结果改过的部分除了一个拉掉的定冠词外((the) morbidity)，全比
被抄的原文更差。比如第一句2003年的原文说是a major problem，这没错。肖
抄的时候，自以为是地给改成a major medical and social problem，就有问题
了。医学问题和社会问题应该不是同一个问题。这是英文太差还是理解力太差？
2005年原文用了pharmacological这个词。肖抄改成pharmacologic但是只改了一
句忘了改第二句。结果搞成了两个等价形式的混用，非常滑稽。而且这一句话的
动词remain是用在三个并列主语上的，原文也没有第三人称单数的s。肖抄给加
了一个s，变成了憋脚的Chinglish。

　　第一篇：
　　An Artificial Somatic-Central Nervous System-Autonomic Reflex 
Pathway for Controllable Micturition After Spinal Cord Injury: 
Preliminary Results in 15 Patients
　　The Journal of Urology, Volume 170, Issue 4, Pages 1237-1241
　　C. XIAO, M. DU, C. DAI, B. LI, V. NITTI, W. de GROAT

　　Neurogenic voiding dysfunction after spinal cord injury (SCI) is a 
major problem. In industrialized nations the mortality related to 
renal problems after SCI has significantly decreased since World War 
II but morbidity has remained significant, chiefly because of poorly 
controlled bladder and bowel functions. In underdeveloped countries 
where medical resources are limited, no significant progress has been 
reported on the mortality and morbidity of survivors of SCI.

　　第二篇：
　　AN ARTIFICIAL SOMATIC-AUTONOMIC REFLEX PATHWAY PROCEDURE FOR 
BLADDER CONTROL IN CHILDREN WITH SPINA BIFIDA
　　The Journal of Urology, Volume 173, Issue 6, Pages 2112-2116
　　C. XIAO, M. DU, B. LI, Z. LIU, M. CHEN, Z. CHEN, P. CHENG, X. XUE, 
E. SHAPIRO, H. LEPOR

　　Abstract
　　Purpose:
　　Neurogenic bladder is a major problem for children with spina 
bifida. Despite rigorous pharmacological and surgical treatment, 
incontinence, urinary tract infections and upper tract deterioration 
remain problematic. ......

　　Neurogenic voiding dysfunction in children with spina bifida is a 
major problem affecting overall health and quality of life. The 
combination of pharmacological agents, surgical bladder augmentation 
and clean intermittent catheterization has limited success. ......

　　第三篇：
　　Reinnervation for Neurogenic Bladder: Historic Review and 
Introduction of a Somatic-Autonomic Reflex Pathway Procedure for 
Patients with Spinal Cord Injury or Spina Bifida
　　European Urology, Volume 49, Issue 1, Pages 22-29
　　C. Xiao

　　Neurogenic voiding dysfunction after spinal cord injury (SCI) 
presents a major medical and social problem. In industrialized nations 
the mortality related to renal problems after SCI has significantly 
decreased since World War II, but the morbidity has remained 
significant, chiefly because of poorly controlled bladder and bowel 
functions [1,2]. In underdeveloped countries where medical resources 
are limited, no significant progress has been reported on the 
mortality and morbidity of SCI survivors.

　　Another huge population with neurogenic voiding dysfunction is 
children with spina bifida which effects one per thousand newborns [3]. 
Despite rigorous pharmacologic and surgical treatment, incontinence, 
urinary tract infections and upper tract deterioration remains 
problematic. The combination of pharmacological agents, surgical 
bladder augmentation and clean intermittent catheterization has 
limited success [4].

(XYS20100102)

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